Working on first album

This will be the 8th (final) track on my album, which should be out within the next month.
Just a one-man band here, recording/mixing it all myself (I'm an audio production student).
However, this particular mix blows, and it's super quiet... it's just the only thing I have available to show at the moment.

Anyway, here's the track, yo! - soundcloud(.)com/oske7/rediscover-the-forgotten
Let me know what you think!
Also, I have no idea what to make the actual artist name for when I release this stuff, any suggestions?